day 3 – [5in5]

our song
by felicity & daniel john

darkened houses
lonely people
empty churches
crooked steeples

they’re singing out
we need a song
we need a song

every corner
hearts broken
has death
already spoken

they’re singing out
we need a song
we need a song

hope arising
making amends
final chapter
o how love mends

and your grace
will be our song
we’ll sing it loud
until we all sing along

our song [5in5 version] by danieljohn

copyright 2011 danieljohnmusic.com

Comments

35 responses to “day 3 – [5in5]”

  1. Matthew Chambers Avatar

    Thanks for sharing this song Dan

    1. danieljohn Avatar

      ….and thanks for stopping by Matthew ๐Ÿ™‚

  2. Jonathan Sperry Avatar
    Jonathan Sperry

    That is fantastic. seriously.

    1. danieljohn Avatar

      Jonathan – thank you so much!

  3. Ruth Avatar
    Ruth

    I am just amazed by your (that’s the plural ‘your’) ability to weave words together. These songs are so poetic! And such strong messages, too. They aren’t fluffy poetic. Really deep and moving. I think you and Felicity need one more week of this and then you’ll have a CD.

    That’s not a joke. : )

    1. danieljohn Avatar

      …then I won’t laugh ๐Ÿ™‚

      But seriously, thank you!

      1. Hannah Avatar

        CD.
        just quit your day jobs, and you’ll whip it out in no time!

        that’s not a joke.

  4. Eleanor Avatar

    Oh my goodness.
    Wow.
    Beautiful.

    1. danieljohn Avatar

      Thank. You. Eleanor.

  5. Carol York Avatar
    Carol York

    This is amazing. Simple and powerful.

    1. danieljohn Avatar

      Carol – thank you for always stopping by and encouraging! So thankful for generous friends.

  6. Serenity Bohon Avatar

    I woke up singing the songs from the first two days. Then I clicked on your blog and literally shivered before I pushed play – so excited to hear the next one. And I’m with Ruth – the poetry is amazing!

    1. danieljohn Avatar

      I’m finding the secret for Felic and I is that we can’t be SO in love with a lyric that it can’t be cut or reworked. Thankfully the deadline keeps the pressure on, and she is a gentle editor.

  7. Lori Avatar

    That song really touched me. Thank you so much for participating & prodding others to do so. Harold & I were talking last night how some amazing songs are coming out of this. Do it again! Do it again!

    1. danieljohn Avatar

      Thank you Lori (& Harold)! I promise we will do it again! ๐Ÿ™‚

  8. Charity Avatar

    I love this one, too!

    1. danieljohn Avatar

      Thanks Charity – I wrote it on a “Loveseat” ๐Ÿ™‚

  9. Jason Avatar

    You’re one of my hero’s bro!! Just love ya! I could listen to your stuff all day. Maybe we should set up a writers weekend and record a compilation album.

    1. danieljohn Avatar

      We’ll talk…you’re reading my mind…

      1. Ruth Avatar
        Ruth

        YYYYYYEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      2. Cam Avatar
        Cam

        Ya I like that idea!!! ๐Ÿ˜€

  10. Felicity Avatar

    On the poetry: that is thanks in part to a challenging English program that taught me a lot about poetry. I really don’t write it (nor did I care for it much at the time), but I realized while working on these songs that I definitely have learned how to apply some of the principles. It would be nice if one of the songs could pay off those school loans to make up for it! : )

  11. Ruth Avatar
    Ruth

    Haha, Felicity, that is awesome! (And will most likely happen.) : )

  12. Keira Avatar

    That is my kind of music! I loved it! I hope you don’t mind, but I’m butting in on the 5in5. After finding out about it yesterday I could’t help myself!! ๐Ÿ™‚

    1. danieljohn Avatar

      Good!! There’s always room for one more! Send me your link and I’ll post it on the [5in5] page.

  13. Kathy Avatar

    I don’t know how you’ve been surviving with all these songs inside you waiting to get out. Marvelous. In the true sense of the word.

    1. danieljohn Avatar

      Here’s the best way I can explain it – it’s like having flint & steel in your backpack and not realizing you already have all the right tools to make a fire until you’re forced into needing one.

      I would like to say that I’m the man of steel (ha) and Felic is the flint, but regardless – we need each other in order to get that creative spark.

  14. Jill Arnold Avatar
    Jill Arnold

    Amazing you two! It is simply amazing! ๐Ÿ™‚

    1. danieljohn Avatar

      Thank you Jill – that means quite a bit coming from the queen of all good music! ๐Ÿ™‚

  15. Liz Avatar

    Dude, good song.

  16. Tiffany Avatar

    and yet another GREAT song, I am so glad you share your talent with the rest of us, love this one!

    1. danieljohn Avatar

      Thanks Tiffany – you’re such an encourager!

  17. James Powell Avatar
    James Powell

    This gets me in the mood to film… I was thinking too I could get my friends involved over in New Zealand next time. They’ve been in a songwriting mood lately. Just a thought. Thought I’d better share before I forgot.

    1. danieljohn Avatar

      Definitely – let’s make it international!

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